If I want to talk about human development , I suspect that many aspects is affecting child's growing up. For example ,environment ,friend ,nurture and so on. But in this essay ,I talk mainly about the family how to impact the child's growth up.
Firstly, I'm pretty sure that parents' education is very important to their children. The majority of parents ask their children to receive education, because they believe that learning is good for their children's future. But parts of parents simple leave their children in school, the performance of child in the school situation, they do not know. Thus resulting in many children go astray , include fraud ,absenteeism, etc. If the parents for the child's performance in more care and discipline, the children would not dare do bad thing. So I strongly believe that parents 's education is important.
Secondly, I'm honestly feel that good family atmosphere influence on children.If the children have good atmosphere in their family, they will feel very happy and comfortable everyday.Thay don't feel annoyed and disturbed by it will bot be angry. A good family atmosphere can cultivate their interests and hobbies ,so thay will naturally grow ,without any constraints. This is good for children's development.
Thirdly,I think that the behavior of parents is very important ,because parents is children's best teachers. Good or bad of parents ,their children will remember and imitate. Therefore ,as a direct impact the children development on parents' behavior. So parents should do their best for their children.
The reason why good family of a children's growth has a very significant impact. Because for a children's growth is good family education important than school or friends .The family is the most important factor in decisions for a children to grow.
Very good. You got lots of good points to writing this essay, especially your points towards the children education from family in early nurture. And, you use the transitions words make your writing structure is fluent, clear and the tone is appropriate.
ReplyDeleteHowever, if you can find some example to support your idea, I think the essay will be better.