Presentation Review - Freya

On Friday, Taishan and I made a presentation about education, so here I try to summarize some information which I hope could be helpful to the following presenters. Firstly, to attract the audience’s attention, we managed to make the presentation not to bore everyone. Therefore, there were many funny pictures that let the procedure vivid. In addition, amendment is so necessary that could enrich the content. For example, after several times of revising, we added the slides from only six slides to about twenty. Thirdly, I think a dry run of a presentation is crucial. We needed more practice of the process about how to control the time of slides and voice. And we also separately did it again. However, we have many shortcomings of the presentation. When I reviewed our work, I felt it lack of logicality and connections between subtitles. Besides, the music voice was generally thought too loud. Moreover, I always was nervous when I spoke English, and Taishan needed more eye contact with listeners. Finally, I desire what I said would be useful to everyone!