Friday, 22 January 2010

Weekly Writing 1- Walter

Academic study is commonly viewed as the most essential part of education. Nowadays education is the chief factor to achieve success in our lives. In my opinion, there are some significant aims for undertaking academic study. Meanwhile, people need to think about effective ways to accomplish them.

Aims of academic study can be divided into two parts. Socially, colleges and universities are factories producing educated employees. Academic study help students attain skills which make them well prepared for work. Additionally, the academic study intends to make our career successful and to have a preferred occupation. Everyone wants to have a well paid work, which would bring them a better living.

Now we may think how to achieve these aims? In some sense, favour as well as opportunity goes to those who have sensible goal for their academic study and appropriate achievable methods. Secondly, reduced class size can be expected to produce increased academic achievement. The Experienced and specialized staffs and educators of universities can support the students to accomplish their aims. In addition, academic study does not only depend on what facilities a University provides. It obviously requires hard work, complete concentration, and regular studies from an individual.

It can be concluded that the various goals of academic studies aims to cultivate students for a bright career. Academic study develops of our intellectual, spiritual and logical abilities and springs up personal growth as well.

1 comment:

  1. Walter,

    This is a very well done essay with a clear focus and strong supporting ideas. You need to use paragraphing to separate main ideas as this will help the reader to understand the flow of your writing. Secondly, try to include 3 main ideas and their supports within each body paragraph as a general rule to create a strongly developed paragraph and topic.

    Well done,

    Jennifer

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