For a student， academic study is now part of education，you can find it’s useful and helpful. However， most of the student don’t like it， because they think it’s boring， difficult and unuseful. This essay is about the aims of academic study and how can they be achieved.
In my opinion， develop personal growth is the most important aim of everyone study anything， naturally it’s the aim of academic study. Study academic can help you rise skills which can help you to survive， for example， you can find the better job. Academic study helps students achieve and understand a wide area of academically subjects， that expands one's experience in that professional subject.
On the other hand，we also know that have a goal is essential， but action is more important than it. If you want the aim to be achieved， the first thing is studying vocabulary， because if you don’t know the vocabulary， you would not understand what is the mind and you could not communicate with other， then you would lost interest of it. For me， when I communicate with somebody， I always don’t know what he says and I can’t express what I want to say. In addition， you also need to discussion with other， do more practice and other things.
Finally，academic study provides personal growth. In order to achieve this goal, there are a number of vocabulary and practice need to be followed.
Taishan,
ReplyDeleteThis is a good essay and there is a clear and logical structure to your ideas! Your thesis statement clearly outlines your essay and your body paragraphs follow this well. Try to include at least 3 main ideas within each body paragraph, as this is a strong number to support your topic sentence. Your introduction could also be a bit more clear.
Good job!
Jennifer