Academic study is the basic of postgradiate and undergraduate student factor. By academic study, students can learn their major deeply and know how to learn self-study skill. This essay will examine the aim of academic study. Then it will discuss how they can be achieved.
First if all, it is widely recignised that to discover more about theories and certain known facts is the most important aim. When students write an essay or a dissertation, they must research sources to prove theories and facts. It is absolutely different from a diary or an ordinary document style, so it would spend a little time adapting writing skill. Secondly, it is apparent that to improve cooperation between different members of world society is the second most important aim. During a seminar, yours partners might come from different nayionalities that have different aspects. The group has to get a common consensus otherwise the group can not finish a seminar or an essay.
Due to students seldom write academic writing before studying university, students must practice research skill. By researching academic Interent or reference books, it can be found that more about theories and certain known facts prove in an essay. On the other hand, during a seminar or group discussion, each partner should abandon self-conscios and accept others views which can improve cooperation with partners.
In conclusion, academic study can improve student's self-study skill and cooperation with other partners. It can strengthen student's ability and help the future career development.
Eddie,
ReplyDeleteThis is a good essay that maintains a clear structure throughout. I like how you clearly defined your structure in the introduction, and discussed the 'aims' and 'hows' of the same points. This allows the reader to follow your logic clearly. Good use of transitions.
Be careful with spelling errors- easily avoided using spell check! It would be useful to use transitional sentences, or summarizing sentences, when transitioning between paragraphs, or topic sentences so that the focus of each paragraph is clear.
Well done,
Jennifer