Presentation Review---Ian

This Friday we did the presentation.I think all of our three did well during the presentation.So thanks Ahmed and Elden.Thank you two.
We worked hard for our first group presentation,and we also very enjoyed the experience of the chance.We three all contributed in our presentation,and then we finished the presentation succeed.
Then I will talk about our presentation.
First,I was a bit nervous during the presentation.Although I pretended to be very relax.There are a lot of information i didn't know it before.So I practiced very hard,try to remember all of the information of our presentation.
After Elden did it,I think the time was not enough for us to finish.So I made my part to some simple sentences and to give time to Ahmed to explain the way how the e-business works.I think we should let everyone know that but not the detailed types of the e-business.
Second,I made mistake during the presentation discussion.After the classmates told me there were some 'mistake' on the board.I didn't think a lot , one is that I was so nervous and hope our presentation can finish succeed,and one is I absolutely didn't know the e-business very clearly before.It was my error.
Finally,thanks to my partners,thank Ahmed and Elden.Thank to my classmates and Jennifer's listening.We will do better the next time.
Thank you.