For a student,the final aim is to get the degree.How can it be achieved?
We must clear that,academic study is the most important in the study.For academic study,the aims are to improve our own ability,to enjoy learning,to pass the exam and to understand the knowledge.The academic study can help us in the every parts.
How can they be achieved is very important.Study skill in the university can decide the final result of your degree.In my opinion.First,the vocabulary is the most important for the international student.Although we may study hard,but the culture background decide that we cannot use the word as well as the local students in the UK or the other English countries.So we must pay more attention to the vocabulary study.Second,we must use the right skill in our study,not only to pay more time to rigid study.Reading more,Writing more,Speaking more English is the base.Above all,we should find some interesting in our study,we must enjoy our academic study,then we could learn more easily in our academic study.
In conclusion,if we combine the right study skill and the hardworking together, the aims of academic study can be achieved better.
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Ian,
ReplyDeleteThis is a well structured essay and your topic is clear. However, it is not very balanced or well developed in certain areas. Your introduction needs to be a bit more developed with background, rather than a one sentence thesis statement/question. Also, the body paragraph on aims seems weak in comparison to the ways in which they can be achieved. An essay needs balance so the argument can be strong. Be careful with word class (ie. hard work- noun form). Good use of transitions.
Good job
Jennifer