Sunday, 31 January 2010

Weekly writing 2 (Second draft)-Nero

Nowadays, increasing number of people think that nurture strongly influences early human 's development.Lots of factors can affect the growth of children,for example,the environment.This essay is about how the environment influences the development of children.

Environment mostly affect children's growth. As we know, when we were born, there are not any difference between us except the nature,such as appearance, gene,sex... As we grow up, we speak different languages, wearing different clothes, eating different food. This is due to we are from different countries and regions ,we have different culture and religions,and we study different things since we were born. It means that it is not the matter that people who was born in UK can speak English certainly. If they were born in UK, but growing up in China, they would speak Chinese very well.in a word, environment changes us. So there is a question: which environment mostly factors influence our growth ?

Firstly,the family give us lots of impacts.For one things, when we were born, our parents were our first teachers,and also will be our teacher for many years even in our whole lives.we learn numerous things from our parents and our families, such as basic skills.knowledge,hobbies and habits. For another, a good family environment is also a great influence on children. A harmonious family will allow their children grow up healthily.But if a children grew up in a violent family environment ,their personalities would be changed a lot.

Secondly, we learn plenty of skills ,knowledge,and other things from school. Academic study can improve our theoretical knowledge and skills. Academic studying is necessary. At first,In school,children can learn lots of professional knowledge which parents can not teach us. With these knowledge, children could improve their personal ability,and these capability make them possible to solve different problems by themselves. The second one, school has a good studying atmosphere. With this atmosphere, children could learn lots of knowledge quickly and easily.

Lastly, most of our personalities are influenced by our friends. If our friend was interested in sprots,and talked about everyday, we would be interested in sports too. That means our interest, hobbies and habits could be changed by our friends. It is easy to have the same interest,hobbies and habits with our friends.

In conclusion, the success of a person is not determined by natural advantages, but it will be acquired by our following efforts. Nurture could improve us a lot, and also could change us a lot. So, nurture strongly influences early human development.

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