Thursday, 28 January 2010

Weekly Writing 2- Walter

Nature can be explained as affects before birth, and nurture often influences human after birth. This essay will outline the nature which influences human development by genetic way. Then, it will discuss the effects of nurture to early human development after birth. Furthermore, it will argue that nurture strongly influences early human development more than nature.

Nature often influences human development from the genetic way, because human fetus develops within the mother’s body. Firstly, nature may cause some genetic disease. Secondly, nature is the reason of some fetus’ abnormal maturation.

Reversely, nurture influences human development after birth. Firstly, the postnatal education influences a child’s normal development. Secondly, living environment also affects a child’s grow up, even the future of the child.

Moreover, the environmental factors can affect the normal maturation of the fetus. At first, human nature is almost completely malleable during his or her infancy. Then there are many experiments aimed at twins. They are treated in different environments, different education and people around. Subsequently, they become greatly different.

In conclusion, nurture influences early human development stronger than nature. Nature influences human only before birth, but nurture may influence a person’s whole life. Only when they are accordant can human development become successful.

1 comment:

  1. It is a good essay,clear structure, ideas,and comparison.We can see the influence from nature and nurture.But there not enough supportideas,can't make people convinced completely. need more details or case.

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