Weekly Writing 2 (second draft)---Vivien

If I want to talk about human development , I suspect that many aspects is affecting children's growing up. For example ,environment ,friend ,nurture and so on. But in this essay ,I talk mainly about the family how to impact the children's growth up.

Firstly, I'm pretty sure that parents' education is very important to their children. The majority of parents ask their children to receive education, because they believe that learning is good for their children's future. But parts of parents simple leave their children in school, the performance of children in the school situation, they do not know. Thus resulting in many children go astray , include fraud ,absenteeism, etc. If the parents for the children's performance in more care and discipline, the children would not dare do bad thing. I think if parents do not discipline their children or can not discipline, then no one can teach these kids, and children will become more lax, more can not control, so that he becomes increasingly uncertain future .So I strongly believe that parents education is important.

Secondly, I'm honestly feel that good family atmosphere influence on children.If the children have good atmosphere in their family, they will feel very happy and comfortable everyday.Thay don't feel annoyed and disturbed by it will not be angry. This not only helps a child's growth, but also contribute to children's learning and personality development.A good family atmosphere can cultivate their interests and hobbies ,so thay will naturally grow ,without any constraints. This is good for children's development.

Thirdly,I think that the behavior of parents is very important ,because parents is children's best teachers. Good or bad of parents ,their children will remember and imitate. Therefore ,as a direct impact the children development on parents' behavior. So parents should do their best for their children.

The reason why good family of a children's growth has a very significant impact. Because for a children's growth is good family education important than school or friends .The family is the most important factor in decisions for a children to grow.