In my opinion , we must have some aims for studying ,especially in the academic study area. If you don’t have any aims in your mind , it would be like the human without head .It will make you lose your direction even you do a lot of effort . On the other words , you will work and come to nothing . For me , I like make a target when I do something , it will help me focus on it and obtain it .
There are some targets of academic study in my mind. First of all , I would like to talk about my target which is logical thinking .I think it is benefit for everyone to have it . It would be help you to deal with the problem that you have never met before .Why I have this ideal because when I finished my dissertation , I found that I have more logical thinking when I face something . It can be achieved from reading .if you read more dissertation and thinking by yourself why the writer want to write this article .When you do it more logical thinking would be one of your ability.
In brief , there are many way to go and get it .If you want, just try your best , to make a good aim and achieved it , I think everything is going to the right way and have a wonderful outcome.
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Barry,
ReplyDeleteYou have some good ideas here in this essay. However, you don't follow the structured outline that you created and we discussed in class. The introduction and first body paragraph seem to blend together. Also, the 2 parts of the question are combined into one body paragraph and would be better developed and supported in two distinct paragraphs.
Well done,
Jennifer