In the present age, academic study is increasingly significant.Numerous parents send their children to universities, and even spend lots of money to send them abroad to study in high level universities.Obviously,they pay more and more attention to academic study.And all of them have many different aims of academic study.This essay is about the aims of academic study,and the efficient approach to achieve it.
In my opinion, the most important aim of academic study is to develop personal growth.we can learn plenty of useful knowledge and professional skills from academic study.we will become a person who is very capable. It is more important than getting a high-level degree. All of us can gain a degree with hard working. But having a degree does not mean that we can get a good job definitely. In present-age society, the vast majority of employers will not give a job to people who have a degree immediately. They pay more attention to individual capability. So to develop personal growth should be the best aim to our study.
There are many ways to achieve our best aim. Firstly, we should work hard both inside class and outside class definitely. we will learn numerous theories with our tutors. And also many skills will be learnt too. Secondly,we should do lots of practice by ourselves with those theories and skills. we should have more and more discussions with our friends. Then we can get some ideas from each others and also solve some problems. Lastly, we should do many research in the library. A great deal of useful information could be found in the library.
Overall, with the aim to develop personal growth and the correct way to our goal.,we will be more successful.
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Nero,
ReplyDeleteThis is a well-structured essay with a clear outline. Your introduction is clear and provides a thesis statement with the basic layout of your essay. Your first body paragraph, however, focuses only on one aim, and the question was to talk about the aims of academic study. I think a few more main ideas to support this paragraph would have been useful. There are some transitions throughout, but more summarizing sentences between paragraphs would be useful to transition between main points. Be careful with word class (with hard work!, not with hard working. Avoid starting sentences with And, and try to use a mix of complex and simple sentence structure.
Good job!
Jennifer