Saturday, 23 January 2010

Weekly Writing 1--- elden

what are the aims of academic study and how can they be achieved?

If the basic education is giving everyone a base to build their brilliant future, academic study will give them the direction of the future.We choose an area that we are interested in and take a specific course. During the course, we learn the skills to make some contributions to this area. In the other word, we get the knowledges about this area.

The most important aim of academic study is making us do well in our own area.We can achieve it through consulting the teachers, discussing with the classmates, doing research or participating activities,etc. They all can lead us to the aims of academic study.

1 comment:

  1. Elden,

    I think it is clear that this essay is not as well developed as it could be. It is only 105 words, compared with the 250 word limit, and it does not have an introduction or conclusion. These are not optional in academic writing. Your essay feels quite general and is not clearly organized with main ideas and supporting ideas. I understand you arrived late, but I expect all future essays to be properly developed and to the lenght required of the task.

    Jennifer

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