As we all know , as a student , the main job is to learn , so learning is a major part of our lives. I think that no matter what kind of job that everyone wants to do perfect , the student the same. If we want to have good success , we should give ourseleves the goal ,and then to move in that direction , maybe we should be serious efforts to complete ,but when you finish one thing , you will feel very confident and very proud.
First ,we should clear the aims of academic study , I feel that learning not only improve our personal qualities ,but also allows us to learn more cultural knowledge ,to learn more about society and life issues. At the same time , we will enjoy the pleasure of learning, because knowledge can give us happiness. Of course , in learning ,we can encountered a number of wise people . I think they are for our personal growth also also plays an important influences.
Secondly, , I think the after class hours arrangement is important ,because if we only rely on knowledge of the class is not enough .I suppose that if we want to have a success in learning ,we should think of more ,see more ,listen more ,and discuss with other more ,so as to make progress. I suspect a wide of reading is also very important. It will expand our mind ,so that we fully understand.
In short ,learning have great impact on a person. Requires not only careful and perseverance , but also requires skill , the only way we can achieve good success.
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Vivien,
ReplyDeleteYour essay lacks a clear structure and focus, and this starts in the introduction. The outline of the essay and the question that you are answering is not clearly laid out in the introduction and does not seem clear through the organization of your paragraphs. Your paragrpahs need topic sentences so that the reader knows the main idea of the paragraph (as the second body paragraph, which talks about how to achieve these aims, is unclear). There are also problems with word order, punctuation, and run on sentences. It is good to use a mixture of complex sentences as well as simple sentences, but punctuation needs to be used correctly in order to do so.
Overall, good job.
Jennifer