Nurture strongly influences early human development
As I know, every family pay more money and energy to nurture child in early age. The parents through different way to influences early human development, such as environment, education, life experience and may be a love family. It is good effect to influences child in childhood.
In my opinion, the environment is an important factor for postnatal. The different environment can make different people. We can clearly see the difference between live in peaceful environment children and live in war condition children. While, nurture in a love family better than live in full in violence of family, it help children grow up and have a good childhood.
Education is a factor that parents should not be overlooked. He not only reflected in today's society, in ancient China had been fully reflected, as you know, Mencius, a thinker, politician and educator. There have a story about Mencius when he was a child. His mother hoped that he had received a good education and a good learning environment, even three consecutive move home, after the Mencius also have achieved successful.
Life experience can even influence a person's development, in daily life we can clearly aware of similar things. The poor people become rich through strive; On the contrary, the rich become poor. The disable people also can be successful and famous; a normal person could do nothing yet.
In conclusion, above my opinion, the nurture can strongly influences human development. Although, nature can not change and even bring us to illness, disability. However, this does not stop our success.
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Nurture strongly influences early human development
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Most people think that nature is important, but I think that nurture can not be ignored. Nowadays, every family pays more money and energy to nurture child in early age. The parents through different way to influences early human development, such as environment, education, life experience and may be a love family. It is good effect to influences child in childhood.It's clear that the environment have strong impact in the early human development. The different environment can make different people. We can clearly see the difference between live in peaceful environment children and live in war condition children. While, nurture in a love family better than live in full in violence of family, it help children grow up and have a good childhood.
Education is a factor that parents should not be overlooked. He not only reflected in today's society, in ancient China had been fully reflected, as you know, Mencius, a thinker, politician and educator. There was a story about a famous thinker who named Mengzi’s three times of moving house. The affection of the environment was a specific factor. So nurture seems so important for early human development.
Life experience can even influence a person's development, in daily life we can clearly aware of similar things. The poor people become rich through strive; On the contrary, the rich become poor. The disable people also can be successful and famous; a normal person could do nothing yet. Give the children a good postnatal education and environment, no matter the children were disabling or not. At least, they can achieve their aims of life.
In conclusion, Nature gives human born abilities and nurture help human to develop the abilities. It means that nature gives innate things to human and people are almost the same when they are born. Then nurture makes the innate things change, it makes different people have different lives. So nurture does more strongly influence early human development
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