With the advance of the human civilization, there are an increasing number of people who have raised doubts about whether the benefits of tourism outweigh the costs. Nonetheless, after much thought, I reckon that tourism is more advantageous. In this essay, I will make an analysis of the reasons in the following paragraphs.
Firstly, from the economic point of view, the tourism is a major source of the country's financial revenue in many countries, and it is financially beneficial to the economic development. “In many less developed countries tourism acts as an alternative to cash crops, improving terms of trade and creating a more diversified economic base”
(From:http://debatepedia.idebate.org/en/index.php/Debate:Tourism). For example, the developing countries need an increasing amount of foreign currencies for its Toward Modernization. Tourism is one of the important channels to obtain such currencies. Furthermore, tourism facilitates the development of the catering business and transportation service as well. Additionally, the tourism makes primary contribution to the national income and tax revenue.
Secondly, from the tourist speaking, through the travel, people can improve the bad mood and rich their experience. Nowadays, more and more people feel the pressure from work, study, family and so on. I think go to travel is a better way to get relaxation and pleasure. On the one hand, people between indulges in the enjoyment of nature on holiday can be forget unpleasant experience of daily life. Traveler also can take a souvenir photo with beauty of the landscape, Reminisce about your favorite times together Friends and Family even after many years. On the other hand, traveling abroad can enrich one's knowledge; only by traveling can we see things outside our country. Travel in other countries, people More or less can learn foreign languages, it is help for communication. Moreover, it is undoubtedly bring more employment opportunity for local of people that develop tourism. Even so, those who lack education background can also be living by selling souvenirs or specialty.
Although both of viewpoints contain some truth, under no circumstances appropriate for us to keep blind to the other side of the coin. Frankly, I want to mention that tourism damages the natural environment and historical interest in some Lack of management regions, such as tourist throw their garbage, water pollution, and monuments have been destroyed. “Millions of feet have eroded paths in the Peak District and the Great Wall of China” (From:http://debatepedia.idebate.org/en/index.php/Debate:Tourism). Another, travelling also spoils the peaceful life of them to some extent because of the activity frequently in the minority regions, we can see most of scenic spots are add to the color of artificial, such as artificial hotels and restaurants; these destroyed strongly the scenic spots.
In conclusion, undeniable the tourism both have benefits and costs. However, to measure the pros and cons is a complex issue, in addition to Number of benefits and costs disparity, also includes the extent different for the benefits and costs. As far as tourism is concerned, a benefit aspect can be offset in a lot of costs. Therefore, for my part the benefits of tourism outweigh the costs.
Reference:
http://debatepedia.idebate.org/en/index.php/Debate:Tourism
Jacqueline Rose (United Kingdom) 2002, do the benefits of tourism outweigh the costs?
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Alex,
ReplyDeleteWhile your essay is clearly structured and easy to follow, there is simply too much plagiarism here. You have many references at the end, but you have copied sentences exactly from the internet without any reference at all, and this is UNACCEPTABLE.
- this complex sentence requires a transition
ex: Firstly, from the economic point of view, the tourism is a major source of the country's financial revenue in many country, AND IT is financially beneficial to the economic development
******* NO PLAGIARISM ***********
'In many less developed countries tourism acts as an alternative to cash crops, improving terms of trade and creating a more diversified economic base. '
EX: THIS SENTENCE IS COPIED EXACTLY FROM:
http://debatepedia.idebate.org/en/index.php/Debate:Tourism
REFERENCE???
ex: 'With the development of our national economy, all these problems will certainly be solved step by step. A much better and brighter future awaits.'
from: http://www.cycnet.com/englishcorner/exam/writing/post.htm
- remember- in-text references only require a last name
ex: (Jacqueline Rose, 2002) --> (Rose, 2002)