Tourism play an important role for the states and people in terms of promoting economic and personal knowledge. There are also some people who think it's a waste of money and time. this essay will show that the benefits of tourism more than costs and point of view of some opponents.
Firstly, tourism are important economically to the state where it helps to improve the economic and financial situation. For example, Dubai, has risen its economy after tourism which is becoming the main income of the state. As the primary beneficiary companies responsible for organizing the work of the flights , and tourism have benefit through the facilities. It also helps the recovery of sales and market movement. Moreover, " provides governments with extra tax revenues each year through accommodation and restaurant taxes, airport taxes, sales taxes, park entrance fees, employee income tax" ( websait, tourismPorsCons ,2010) . In addition, brings new money into the economy and creates many jobs for the unemployed and student , it's also to improve the means of transport.
secondly, tourism helps a person to learn other cultures civilizations which helps to develop the knowledge to him. It also helps to learn other language than the mother langauge that help him to communicate with people who are frome other countries and to know their customs and traditions. Indeed, tourism helps the person to have a rest and relax fo a period of time and renewal of psychological. In addition, help to get a job and develop skills and knowledge through other methods of work and move it to his countery. Moreover, may change individual behaviour and family relationship to be better than before.
On the other hand, some people think that tourism may result in harassment of visitors perceived to be wealthy and an increase in crime. Also. can involve violations of human rights. Some people have been displaced from their lands and beaches because they are reserved for guests in hotels. " Loss of traditional values and culture through imitation of visitor behaviour or cultural diffusion resulting from normal , everyday interaction"(websait, geographyfieldwork/tourismPorsCons, 2010). In addition, there would be competing with the local population on the opportunities available facilities and recreational opportunities.
In conclusion, i think travel and visit other countries is more benefit than the budget of travel which helps people and economy to have more beneficial. As i said before about Dubai and about how tourism can help people to do many things positive.
referance:
www.geographyfildwork/tourismPorsCons.com
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ReplyDeleteThis is a fairly well-structured essay but there is a real problem here with the development of ideas. Ideas need not only be listed, but explained, using examples and supports to show how they apply! Good attempt at referencing but incorrect format in-text and at the end of text. See below and refer to your referencing guide for how to properly cite an internet source.
-introduction is very brief for an essay of 500 words
- don't forget to reference data or facts
ex: 'For example, Dubai, has risen its economy after tourism which is becoming the main income of the state'
- incorrect phrasing
ex: As the primary beneficiary companies responsible for organizing the work of the flights , and tourism have benefit through the facilities.
** If you begin with "As the..." this is usually followed by a reason or a result.
ex: As the primary company responsible for the flights to and from Dubai, British Airways has made an enormous profit this year due to the increase in tourism.
( ex: the result of BA being the sole airline is that they made more money)
- spelling: website * ( don't include website in your in-text reference, just the name and year, or webpage and date accessed)
- remember, you must develop all supporting ideas
ex: "It also helps the recovery of sales and market movement." --> you don't explain this at all!
ex: In addition, brings new money into the economy and creates many jobs for the unemployed and student , it's also to improve the means of transport.
--> you don't connect the ideas of unemployment and transport at all here!
- fragment, not a sentence!
ex: As i said before about Dubai and about how tourism can help people to do many things positive.
ex: " Loss of traditional values and culture through imitation of visitor behaviour or cultural diffusion resulting from normal , everyday interaction"(websait, geographyfieldwork/tourismPorsCons, 2010)
- also, the conclusion needs to be a bit more developed for an essay of this length
ReplyDeletegood job overall!