Weekly writing 2 (Second draft)---Iris

AS we know, both nature and nurture all influence human development. The topic of that which one is more important in determining the course of human development has been debated for many years. This essay is about nurture play an essential role in early human development.


As far as I am concerned, we know that family environment is all-important affect our life, especially in our childhood. For example, if the children live in the family which was full of love, the child will be happier, more easy-going. It was reported that children who grow up in the unhealthy family like single parent, they are more attacked, because they lose of the sense of security. Furthermore, parents are the first teacher of children. They listen and see what parents do, follow them.


Secondly, education also affects human development in a great degree. We learn in school, throughout the course training, we get expert skills, and social skills. The skills that we get is very important for us to consummate our personality. For instance, through education, we get the knowledge, realize the world, and also get the skills for work, and know how to social interactive, like we have good communication skills, make friends. These all make us more independent.


By contrast, someone will say that our genius will not be change, therefore, nature play a more important role in human development. It is right that we cannot change our skin, eyes, hair and general body size. However, our character could be developed in the postnatal education. Character requires long time and nurturing for growth and development.


In conclusion, from what has been discussion above. Although we cannot change our DNA, nurture do really affect our character in great degree.

Weekly Writing 2----Iris

AS we know, both nature and nurture all influence human development. The topic of that which one is more important in determining the course of human development has been debated for many years. This essay is about nurture play a essential role in early human development.


As far as I am concerned , we know that family environment is all-important affect our life, especially in our childhood. For example, if the children live in the family which was full of love, the child will be more happy, more easy-going. It was reported that children who grow up in the unhealthy family like single family ,they are more attacked ,cause they lose of the sense of security. Furthermore, parents are the first teacher of children. We listen and see what parents do, then follow them.


Secondly, education also affect human development in a great degree. We learn in school, throughout the course training , we get expert skills, and social skills also. The skills that we get is very important for us to consummate our personality . For instance, through education, we get the knowledge, realize the world, and also get the skills for work , and know how to social interactive , like we have good communication skills, make friends . These all make us more independent .


By contrast, someone will say that our genius will not be change, therefore , nature play a more important role in human development. It is right that we cannot change our skin ,eyes, hair and general body size. However, our character could be developed in the postnatal education. Character requires long time and nurturing for growth and development.


In conclusion, from what has been discussion above. Although we cannot change our DNA, nurture do really affect our character in great degree. We can get a lot from the postnatal nurture, therefore ,nurture strongly influence human development.

weekly writing 2 - Ahmed

I think that Nurture is very decisive for who we’ll be when we get older , but nature and nurture makes us who we are.Nurture is more important in parenting children but when they are over the age of teens or older nature is more important.

Nurture Provides love, support, attention, and encouragement , that’s why it affect the future of children and helps them grow, learn and develop socially.

However once they are reached there teens or older nature start to affect them in their professionnal and social life...

some of the things we know about the world are herditary, as well changeable by the influence of the family. kids are influenced by their families, friends and the enviroment they living in. taking the example of the social classes differences. a study made on kids of differnet classes of the society showed that kids always are influenced by their families and will end up doing a similar job to their family and to people from the same neighbourhood they have been living in.

to conclude, nurture can be very influencing at an early age of the life hood, but as the human being get to the age of teens, the nature start to play its job.